Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Sophie

Sophie Pascoe was born 8th of January 1993. She grew up in Christchurch.
She had a normal child life but had a life changing moment.
At the age of seven years old, she was involved in a lawn  mower accident sophie was rushed to hospital.
Sophie had surgery for five hours the lawn mower had amputated her leg off.
She had a grandfather who inspired her to do swimming she had promised  her grandfather she would win a gold medal. Her grandfather had passed away.
She won three gold medals and one silver at Beijing in 2008.

She told her swimming coach she would like to be in the paralympics. She is inspiring lots and lots of people who have something wrong with them to never give up.

Monday, 15 August 2016

Shoping with my Mum

Mischa 28/7/16 Shopping With My Mum
One rainy day, my mum and I drove off to The Base because I had to spend my birthday money.


I wanted to have a look at the Warehouse so Mum and I ran through the freezing rain to get to the Warehouse.


When I finally reached  the warmth air of the shop, I could  no longer feel the cold rain.


First, I spotted a blue blanket. I could not keep my eyes off it so  I asked my mum if I could get it. Mum replied yes. I was so happy.


Soon after that, my eyes spotted two pairs of pyjamas one had Pink flamingos and the other pair had Paris. I asked if I could get the Pyjamas.  Mum said yes.  My heart was pounding with excitement.


Ten minutes later, I asked if I could go to Kmart so Mum and I had to walk in the freezing cold air.


Finally, when Mum and I arrived in the warmth air of Kmart, I raced to the pillows I saw a pillow it said dream.

So Mum and I  strolled off to the checkouts and paid for my pillow. I was so happy.

Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Matariki

Long time ago, there lived seven sisters. They were mean to other people. They thought they were the best even though they were the meanest. They loved making people cry and they loved stealing people's goodies.  

One day, the seven sisters climbed a tree. It was not like any other tree. It was called the golden tree because it was gold coloured. The tree reached right to the sky but this day it led them to more.

As they climbed up the big tree, they heard a big noise. They got frightened. It was an albatross flying in the air. All of the seven sisters got scared as the albatross came towards them. They got caught then suddenly the seven sisters got put up in the milky way and that is how Matariki started.

Monday, 23 May 2016

The horrbile anveter

Mischa and Olivia were best friends. They had lots of amazing trips together. They lived inside the Alleyway of Doom, next to the evil forest of doom. 

As Mischa and Olivia were walking down the cobbled street to get to the evil Forest of Doom, they saw a king-fisher the king-fisher had beautiful wings it was like they were in heaven They were lucky because it led them right to the evil forest of doom. Crush as they walked on the leafy ground Suddenly they heard a big big Bang Olivia ran towards the path NO! WAIT screamed Mischa looked for Olivlia was no were to be found Mischa was scared but then suddnely Mischa heard a call off shout  it was a olivila saying that there was a Bee that had a werid Buzz okay said Mischa now lets go okay replied Olivia but until then they tryed to look for the path Olivia relieds that they were LOST!!!!!! Mischa and Olivia felt with scarceness Um said Olivia are lost talk I thick Mischa said Olivia got scared this is all you fault shouted Olivia No said Mischa if you didn't want to go and see the weird buzz. They fighted  and fighted until the moon grew dark lets put the tent up Mischa said madlee Yes we schould wait were is the tent oh for goodness sake do not tell me you lost the tent shouted Mischa oh do shh replied Olivia oh well guess we will have to sleep on the ground with bug and slugs said Mischa
 2 hours later Mischa Olivia we are you shouted Mischas mum Mischa and Olivia suddley woke up Mum lisa shouted Miscs

Sunday, 22 May 2016

Tom's Bad Day With His Snake

WALT make up a story about a Pet Day problem.
WWBSWW:
  • Begin with an orientation to tell the reader who, did what, where and when.
“Pet Day will be on Friday,” Miss Anderson, Tom’s teacher, announced to the class on Monday. “Bring your pet to school and tell us about it, then we will have a pet parade.”
Tom was so excited. He would be able to bring Harry to school to 
show everyone.
  • Write the events leading up to the problem.
At the end of the day, he ran all the way home to get his pet ready for Friday.
He loved Harry and had wanted to show his friends for a long time, but his mum and dad had told him that Harry must never leave the house; but, now, his
teacher had given him permission to bring it to school.
Smilingly, he polished Harry’s green silky skin, talking to it with his friendly voice. “You’re allowed to come to school, Harry. You can meet my friends and my friends can meet you.”
As soon as Friday came around, Harry carefully took Harry out of its cage and placed him into his black backpack. He couldn’t wait to get to school, so he ran
all the way.
When the bell rang, he and the rest of the class stepped into the 
classroom.
  • Write the problem.
Tom opened his backpack to show his friends what he had brought to school for Pet Day.
“It’s a green, slippery, slimey …...................” he said slowly. “Snake!” he 
shouted.
“Tom Denver, give me that thing right now!” Miss Anderson 
commanded.
Tom opened his hand to pass it over, but, at that moment, naughty Billy Burton lunged to grab it himself. He bumped Tom’s shoulder and Tom hurtled forward, the snake flying out of his hand to the back of the classroom.
“Eeeeeee! Where is it?” squealed Miss Anderson.
Chaos threatened in Room 4.  Children jumped up and ran around, screeching
their lungs out and pushing over chairs and desks, trying to find Tom’s snake.

  • Write the events to tell your readers how the problem was solved.
Miss Anderson was mad but, suddenly, Tom had a solution. He asked his friend, Johnathan, to get some food so he did.

Tom stood behind Harry and, with a big HISS! Tom let go.

Everyone was screaming their lungs out.

Tom yanked Harry. He struggled as he was trying to hold on. He was frightened. He did not want to get told off any more.

Everyone was happy.

"Right!" roared Miss Anderson. "You will not bring Harry again!"

Everyone agreed with a big ‘yes’.

Tom smiled and sat down at his tall desk.


Well done, Mischa. You have written some interesting sentences, especially in paragraph 4, where you explained to us how Tom was feeling.