The horrbile anveter

Mischa and Olivia were best friends. They had lots of amazing trips together. They lived inside the Alleyway of Doom, next to the evil forest of doom. 

As Mischa and Olivia were walking down the cobbled street to get to the evil Forest of Doom, they saw a king-fisher the king-fisher had beautiful wings it was like they were in heaven They were lucky because it led them right to the evil forest of doom. Crush as they walked on the leafy ground Suddenly they heard a big big Bang Olivia ran towards the path NO! WAIT screamed Mischa looked for Olivlia was no were to be found Mischa was scared but then suddnely Mischa heard a call off shout  it was a olivila saying that there was a Bee that had a werid Buzz okay said Mischa now lets go okay replied Olivia but until then they tryed to look for the path Olivia relieds that they were LOST!!!!!! Mischa and Olivia felt with scarceness Um said Olivia are lost talk I thick Mischa said Olivia got scared this is all you fault shouted Olivia No said Mischa if you didn't want to go and see the weird buzz. They fighted  and fighted until the moon grew dark lets put the tent up Mischa said madlee Yes we schould wait were is the tent oh for goodness sake do not tell me you lost the tent shouted Mischa oh do shh replied Olivia oh well guess we will have to sleep on the ground with bug and slugs said Mischa
 2 hours later Mischa Olivia we are you shouted Mischas mum Mischa and Olivia suddley woke up Mum lisa shouted Miscs

Tom's Bad Day With His Snake

WALT make up a story about a Pet Day problem.

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• Begin with an orientation to tell the reader who, did what, where and when.

“Pet Day will be on Friday,” Miss Anderson, Tom’s teacher, announced to the class on Monday. “Bring your pet to school and tell us about it, then we will have a pet parade.”

Tom was so excited. He would be able to bring Harry to school to 

show everyone.

• Write the events leading up to the problem.

At the end of the day, he ran all the way home to get his pet ready for Friday.

He loved Harry and had wanted to show his friends for a long time, but his mum and dad had told him that Harry must never leave the house; but, now, his

teacher had given him permission to bring it to school.

Smilingly, he polished Harry’s green silky skin, talking to it with his friendly voice. “You’re allowed to come to school, Harry. You can meet my friends and my friends can meet you.”

As soon as Friday came around, Harry carefully took Harry out of its cage and placed him into his black backpack. He couldn’t wait to get to school, so he ran

all the way.

When the bell rang, he and the rest of the class stepped into the 

classroom.

• Write the problem.

Tom opened his backpack to show his friends what he had brought to school for Pet Day.

“It’s a green, slippery, slimey …...................” he said slowly. “Snake!” he 

shouted.

“Tom Denver, give me that thing right now!” Miss Anderson 

commanded.

Tom opened his hand to pass it over, but, at that moment, naughty Billy Burton lunged to grab it himself. He bumped Tom’s shoulder and Tom hurtled forward, the snake flying out of his hand to the back of the classroom.

“Eeeeeee! Where is it?” squealed Miss Anderson.

Chaos threatened in Room 4.  Children jumped up and ran around, screeching

their lungs out and pushing over chairs and desks, trying to find Tom’s snake.

• Write the events to tell your readers how the problem was solved.

Miss Anderson was mad but, suddenly, Tom had a solution. He asked his friend, Johnathan, to get some food so he did.

Tom stood behind Harry and, with a big HISS! Tom let go.

Everyone was screaming their lungs out.

Tom yanked Harry. He struggled as he was trying to hold on. He was frightened. He did not want to get told off any more.

Everyone was happy.

"Right!" roared Miss Anderson. "You will not bring Harry again!"

Everyone agreed with a big ‘yes’.

Tom smiled and sat down at his tall desk.

Well done, Mischa. You have written some interesting sentences, especially in paragraph 4, where you explained to us how Tom was feeling.

From Jamling Tenzing

Jamling Tenzing

May 14 at 1:56pm · Namche Bazar, Nepal

To all the children of St. Paul's primary school, greetings from the Himalayas.

I know you have been following John and our journey to the to roof of the world. I hope you learned something about our mountains and culture.

I invite you all to join me one day to visit our part of the world..

Hi my name is Mischa and I have been learning and finding information about your journey to the Himalayas and Mount Everest with John. I have found lots of information about Tenzing Norgay and Sir Edmund Hillary I heard that you are related to Tenzing Norgay. And I hope someday I can climb Mount Everest with you.

Jamling Tenzing Hello Mischa, glad to know that you are learning a great deal from our trek to Everest base camp, I look forward to having you join me in one of my trips when you are older and ready to do so.

Mount Everest

The Magic Show

Today we all got to see a magic show. We got to see Jonathan and ‘You got the power.’ My heart was pounding with excitement. 

We all went into the hall. Everyone came in. Johnathan said hello. We all said hello back. He smiled. 

‘Wow!’ I thought as his wallet caught on fire. My eyes lit up! I thought it would burn his wallet but, no! It was still the same. I think if I did that, my wallet would burn. 

After that, he did another one. He asked a little girl, called Riley, to choose her favourite animal. She got a dog. 

After that, it was time to go. We were sad, but our next magic show was called YOU GOT THE POWER.

As the bird flew out of the tiny cage, we saw a beautiful rainbow. My eyes were in heaven, just looking at the beautiful bird. 

About ten minutes later, my favourite magic show was the floating man. Sue told El Gregoe to lie on the table. He replied, “Ok,” but, suddenly, he started floating! Woosh! I could not believe my eyes! My sister, Ruby, could not believe her eyes either. 

Unfortunately, it was time to go home, but I liked going to the magic show. It was the best day ever!

Pentecost

The  Church is people spreading the Good News. 
When Jesus died,  his disciples got scared but then Jesus sent  the Holy Spirit  and gave them courage. 
After Jesus sent the Holy Spirit to his disciples, they were not scared and started to tell the Good News then everyone started to believe the Good News of Jesus.  We celebrate this day because it is important. It is Pentecost. 
It was the beginning of the Church.